reaction to Aerin's criticism

Aerin said my weakness was that this wasn't concrete and she couldn't figure out exactly what it is I'm trying to do.

Here are my basic goals revisited:
- Teach the basic fundamentals of making a film
- Create a fun, friendly environment to do so
- Use as little money as possible to do so
- Make a film where all the campers feel they played a role in the final product
- Have as much fun as possible